In the night, I went to organization of dormitory’s internet with my friend. We told a lot, we told about the history Second World War in china. I didn’t why we told about it. We told about how Japanese killed the Chinese people, they used very ruthless way to Chinese people. We just couldn’t believe how cruel it is. They didn’t give the prisoner a quire, they tyrannize the prisoner. Besides, they did with the woman was the same, cruel way. I was very angry about they violate the woman no matter how old they are. They did that again and again. Then the victim had to suffer this and Japanese haven’t apology in public. Specifically, Second World War took place by Japan, then, the America put two atomic bomb, and then, they felt they were the victim. I can’t recognize why, they must apology to us. When I watched the Second World War video or book, why human so cruel. Why did we have to attack each other?
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Hi Carrol. This post is interesting. However, I am sure you have not grammar checked it, or spell checked either. For instance, you write "china" with a small c! What is a "quire?" You use the wrong form of "apology" (it should be a verb, not a noun). "Took place by Japan" does not make any sense. Neither does watching a book, unless the book is moving around. I got your idea, but still there are too many grammar problems. Also, I count only five entries for the whole first half of the semester! That hurts your grade, of course. You should have had 15 by Oct. 21st, but there is only ONE! Also, by now there ought to be 24 entries. I must count only the entries for the first blogging period, from the beginning of the semester until 10/21; the others will count for the second blogging period, ending on Dec. 2nd. You really need to get writing!! Thanks for the blog address, though.
Grade for this first period is 7.
Chris O'Brien
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